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Wow Molly, we (Room 2), love the way you have read your story with so much expression! You have used a good selection of interesting adverbs too. Next time you could add in your speech marks, around your direct speech. Remember to begin sentences with capital letters and finish with either . ? or !
Wow Molly, we (Room 2), love the way you have read your story with so much expression! You have used a good selection of interesting adverbs too. Next time you could add in your speech marks, around your direct speech. Remember to begin sentences with capital letters and finish with either . ? or !
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